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It looks a little Mary-Sue. I might suggest WHY. But that's too rude. Anyways it's really mary sue and I suggest toneing down the color...

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It looks a little Mary-Sue. I might suggest WHY. But that's too rude. Anyways it's really mary sue and I suggest toneing down the colors because I think you could have made the feet less, blockish and the wings more feathery. Just a critique ok? No harm. Anyways just don't make it a mary sue please, no one likes them. K? Sorry if I come off rude.


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